Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Karoro School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Kia ora Lucy, I really enjoyed reading your Hakiu poem.I really love the words you used for it. The first line was my favourite. It made me think about the mountains.next time finish with a full stop.Kind regards Pippa
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Kia ora Lucy, I really enjoyed reading your Hakiu poem.
ReplyDeleteI really love the words you used for it. The first line was my favourite. It made me think about the mountains.next time finish with a full stop.
Kind regards Pippa