Kia Ora Lucy, I love your polar bear report it is so interesting! It looks very professional. It has been done so well that if you said they were purple and lived in Fiji I would have believed you!
Wow Lucy! That looks great. You have heaps of wonderful information there. I like how the slides looked so professional. The pictures looked awesome. Next time make sure that the words aren't too small. Good job. From Emma.
Kia ora Lucy, its Libbie here. I love your polar bear report, it's awesome. I really enjoyed reading all of the information you put into your writing. I love polar bears too but for a change I did turtles. When I first looked at it, it looked professional. Good job!
Hey Lucy my name is Jasmine i'm a year 6 student go to Paparore School I personally think that even knowing that animals are endangered is so sad I love the details and facts but I would have loved to see more. This reminds me of the time our class did marine reserve slides about endangered species what do you think about this??👍😊
Hey Lucy my name is Leah I'm in year 6 and I go to Paparore I am just in love with those little polar bears are they really that big do they actually eat the carcass of a whale. I'm just saying just to help you might want to do a little bit more sentences and your paragraphs other than that it's very mean but its good.Did you enjoy making it? .P.S. you didn't really get to the point of why they are endangered just saying
Hey Lucy, I really enjoyed reading your post about polar bears. I totally agree all about polar bears and what you said was all correct I'm pretty sure. Not that I didn't love your post but I don't think you really got to the point of why they are endangered. Did you enjoy making it?😊😕🐭
Hello Lucy my name is Leah I am a year 6 and I go to Paparore school I really like the way you told us about the endangered species of the polar bar . I thought it was very nice but it's sad because you know eating the carcass of the whale not that good I think you could do more sentences and your paragraphs did you enjoy making it? You didn't really get to the point of why they are endangered but I'm just saying no biggie?
Its Aimee here. I really like the way you have shared facts about polar bears. It made me think about when I watch T.V programs and they have polar bears on them. Maybe next time you could include where you might see polar bears apart from the Antarctic.
Jessica here I really like the pictures you have put in your endangered animal report. This slide shows reminds me of when I did my endangered animal report.
hi Lucy I enjoyed your slide it is really sad that polar bears are in danger the pictures are amazing maybe you could of put some more on but great job I look forward to seeing more
Kia Ora Lucy,
ReplyDeleteI love your polar bear report it is so interesting! It looks very professional. It has been done so well that if you said they were purple and lived in Fiji I would have believed you!
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Thank you so much Harper!
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Wow Lucy! That looks great. You have heaps of wonderful information there.
ReplyDeleteI like how the slides looked so professional. The pictures looked awesome. Next time make sure that the words aren't too small. Good job.
From Emma.
Kia ora Lucy, its Libbie here.
ReplyDeleteI love your polar bear report, it's awesome. I really enjoyed reading all of the information you put into your writing.
I love polar bears too but for a change I did turtles.
When I first looked at it, it looked professional. Good job!
Hi Lucy it's Atawhai.
ReplyDeleteI really like your report. Now I know so much more about polar bears. Your work is amazing! It looks very professional.
Hey Lucy my name is Jasmine i'm a year 6 student go to Paparore School I personally think that even knowing that animals are endangered is so sad I love the details and facts but I would have loved to see more. This reminds me of the time our class did marine reserve slides about endangered species what do you think about this??👍😊
ReplyDeleteHey Lucy my name is Leah I'm in year 6 and I go to Paparore I am just in love with those little polar bears are they really that big do they actually eat the carcass of a whale. I'm just saying just to help you might want to do a little bit more sentences and your paragraphs other than that it's very mean but its good.Did you enjoy making it? .P.S. you didn't really get to the point of why they are endangered just saying
ReplyDeleteHey Lucy, I really enjoyed reading your post about polar bears. I totally agree all about polar bears and what you said was all correct I'm pretty sure. Not that I didn't love your post but I don't think you really got to the point of why they are endangered. Did you enjoy making it?😊😕🐭
ReplyDeleteHello Lucy my name is Leah I am a year 6 and I go to Paparore school I really like the way you told us about the endangered species of the polar bar . I thought it was very nice but it's sad because you know eating the carcass of the whale not that good I think you could do more sentences and your paragraphs did you enjoy making it? You didn't really get to the point of why they are endangered but I'm just saying no biggie?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Lucy,
ReplyDeleteIts Aimee here. I really like the way you have shared facts about polar bears. It made me think about when I watch T.V programs and they have polar bears on them. Maybe next time you could include where you might see polar bears apart from the Antarctic.
Thanks for sharing on your blog.
From Aimee
Kia ora Lucy.
ReplyDeleteJessica here I really like the pictures you have put in your endangered animal report. This slide shows reminds me of when I did my endangered animal report.
Great work!!
From Jessica
hi Lucy I enjoyed your slide it is really sad that polar bears are in danger the pictures are amazing maybe you could of put some more on but great job I look forward to seeing more
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